Looking for critics for my Haiku

Forum thread started by JohnsonHaiku on Wed, 2005-08-10 16:07

Please let me know if a Haiku I worte is acceptable as is or needs to be changed to work.

We lie on the beach
Falling in love, as summer
Softly approaches.

Comments

by myob - 2005-08-10 17:20

Wrong type of Haiku for this site...

by shadow - 2005-08-11 12:39

To clarify MYOB's comment a bit, this isn't a poetry site. It is for an operating system named "Haiku".

by h_ank - 2005-08-11 15:13

wrong type of web site
code poets are honored here
summer dies alone